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Mamigon
08-09-2008, 01:50 PM
I would like to get your inputs on a small flyer that I did for a client.

http://www.mamigon.com/images/folio/yoga-FlyerB.jpg

What do you think about the design?
What shouldn't of I done?
What should of I done?

your comments and suggestions ?
Thanks

CkretAjint
08-09-2008, 03:38 PM
I like it over all. A few tweaks I see though.

– Drop the water mark in the background down a tad so you lose the itty-bitty portion of it poking up at the bottom.
– Push the body copy paragraphs up since the right hand column is rather close to the bottom.
- And lose the justified text since it is causing HUGE gaps in your copy.

:)

budafist
08-10-2008, 08:51 AM
Ckret has some good suggestions.

I would also make the circle in the logo a bit smaller. White space around the logo will help give it more of a clean, fresh look. Which I imagine would work nicely for yoga.

ashleyJACKskyla
08-10-2008, 04:55 PM
nice and clean...nice typeface! and i agree with budafist, the white space would be a nice contrast! but nice work!

Optimusdinkus
08-11-2008, 10:26 PM
Candy corn...mmmmm but in the dark licorice variety =D. Looks great imo

Randomhero
08-12-2008, 12:07 AM
I like it a lot. The type seems really small to me but other than that it looks good. The logo at the top is pretty sweet.