So i designed this flyer...

[DeleteYourself]

I just wanted to get a little feedback. I take constructive cricism really well, so don't hold back. Much appreciated...

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[Tyger]

I think the logo is great, nice colours. I think the 'presents' needs to be moved down just a tad, but maybe because the way it looks on my monitor.

The Tyger is on the prowl...

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[Silence04]

very nice...
couple things:
"@ The Bulldog Lounge" on the front is a little hard to read... maybe make it a thicker font or put a faint white overlay outer glow around it. (or it might just be that "B" in "Bulldog," like take it off that red line somehow...)
i think the back needs something to seperate the text better, like a line or two... or maybe put some of the text in black and put them inside of white boxes/bars (if you know what i mean)

but it looks very good otherwise. ;)
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Taylor

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[D-Zine]

I like this flyer alot actually. I love the graphic on the front and the colors...except the blue text. It looks a little outta place to me with the yellows and reds and the black that is on the back. I would either make it black or go with that dark deep red that you already have incorporated in the design. Also..maybe nudge the word 'presents' down just a little...its almost touching 'Dafenix' so its kinda disturbing. I would put equal space between that and the 'U' for 'Rise Up' :o)

I love the graphic...very nice!! I think I see something very faint in the background on the backside of the flyer but I can't tell what it is. Maybe you can lighten that just a LITTLE..so that it is a tiny bit more visable?!

This looks good, great job! Post updates if you get a chance!

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Who says doodling isn't constructive?!

[DeleteYourself]

Thanks for the comments! Yeah, I don't know why the presents was so close, it must have been inadvertently nudged at some point. I'll post an update later when I get a chance to play some more.

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[vectorgfxqueen]

Hey, DeleteYourself, what's up in sunny South Florida! These are trax cards? Like it, but a few suggestions:

The front is great, but to me the emphasis should be on the Rise up and Bulldog, less on the graphic...smaller graphic, keep the sun rays and larger letters.

For the back, what silence said...break the back up in squares or swirls or something behind, with different section of words in different boxes....something to make you want to continue reading past the first paragraph! Why not a little of the color from the front in the back? Maybe in some letters?

Good luck, who's your printer there? Have you ever used Twig in Boynton I think...bottom end, down your way. I really liked them and they have great deals on trax cards...there office is way cool, each office inside looks like a different building front.
Peace

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