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PINKformula
11-26-2008, 03:42 AM
hey everyone, i finaly made my online portfolio
tell me what you think and if anything could be better!
www.camillepilon.com
thanks!
The portfolio's great, but the website is too wide. There's a whole bunch of useless space on the left, forcing me to scroll to the right with every page I load to get to the actual content. But the content part of the website fits very nice and neatly in my browser window, so if you just removed the gradient yellow bar and all that extra white space on the left, it'll all be perfect. ;)
PINKformula
11-26-2008, 03:12 PM
thanks for the reply ill work on the position :)
There is too much going on with gradients type and illustration. I dig it a lot but you have some pieces that could be on there own. Like some logos and the ipod images. They would look brilliant 3 times as big. The main logo which is very abstract what does it say. you site is called camillepilon but the logo is ? a m ???
Some of the best portfolio sites do not need to over bulk the use of work. some of your best pieces could sell you better without having to put as much work on.
Prosco
12-01-2008, 02:24 PM
I enjoyed your designs and I think your site is extremely creative and it gives a lot of information about your skills. Though, it was hard for me to find your contact details. Finally I managed to this but it would be better if you create a separate page or them instead of showing them in pdf
you site is called camillepilon but the logo is ? a m ???
I think that's supposed to read "cam".
steve2112
12-02-2008, 03:55 AM
personally for me i think its kind of lame to have the sections like Indesign, photoshop, illy. I would break things down to something more professional sound like simple Layouts, Illustrations and what not. You work is nice and i am digging the site.
come to think about it I do not like where the words for the portfolio are placed. When it loads they are like centered on the screen and is awkard. Its a real good start though. Has a slight girlie feel to it but still maintains some macho.
steve
Has a slight girlie feel to it but still maintains some macho.
You mean like a macho girl? Rawr!! :cool:
Ruffus CDXX
12-02-2008, 07:44 AM
I love every single pixel of it! Very cool! Except I could use an english version! ;)
And I'm pretty sure it's intended to be girly there Steve. You could change the headers from Photoshop, Illy etc to something else though, eh?