Another Package Design

[Silence04]

ok what do you guys think of this one....is it too over done?

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[Ryan8720]

It's a cool design, but when I see it tanning stuff doesn't come to mind. The matter of fact, it looks like a hot sauce bottle...except for the desire part.

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[RichieD]

Actually, I thought it was an alcoholic drink of some sort at first glance.

[Ryan8720]

Yep, you're right Richie. I think it's because of the shape.

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[Fusiondesigner]

Weird, it's kinda a drink or some hot sauce in a diff bottle! Well I like this though.

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[vectorgfxqueen]

I like it, also...very good design with swirls and fire. Maybe to make it look more like suntan lotion, make that design part on a large label, and show the sides, bottom and top of the bottle dark like suntan bottles. Just a thought!

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I love it man. The only thing, like Ryan said is the botel. Look at all the taning lotions out there their almost all flip top, with a flat top and toothpaste like body. But the design is really good.

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[Madora]

Sweet! I'm diggin' it. I agree that it does look kind of like a drink or hot sauce bottle, but I think that's just because we're not seeing the real bottle. Maybe showing the bottom, sides and top like Vector said would help that as well.

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[DeleteYourself]

This is kind of nitpicky, but the 'a lucious hot experience' looks too rigid with its font and alignment. It doesn't really match the rest of the design. Maybe make that more in tune with the overall design, but I like it. I think it's great how you made it look different of other sun-tan products out there. Good for getting people's attention and differentiation in the market (assuming that's what the client wants).

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[Amrpro]

I like graphicxqueens suggestion about exposing the contents and changing the design to a label. That way it looks much more..well in my opinion, professional. Right now it reminds me of some kind of edible body oil.

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[xosteve]

looks like porn lube. seriously.


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[Silence04]

thanks for the comments guys... i did make some adjustments to the design.
the client has decided to put this line in a different bottle, this one does look too much like a hot sauce bottle of some sort...
but as for using an adiesive lable instead, this job was specifically ment for a full shrink lable, i guess to give it that jump off the shelf look (kinda like that new EZ-Squeeze Ketchup bottle)...plus, that seems to be where the tanning market is going.

i will post the whole product line in a few days.

Taylor

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