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kevincdg
02-26-2009, 09:59 PM
Project: A tradeshow booklet for client. They are a web oriented company and want to make sure that is expressed through the booklet. They deal exclusively with 3D animations for surgical patients and medical equipment. They wanted a piece to show the diversity of their services and explain what they do. It will be focused toward sales reps and ad agencies, so the design MUST be clean.

Requirements:

MUST use screenshots of their websites (this really complicated things, so we'll see if my solution is ok).

Also, the logos on one of the Lisenecing page are like that because they do not have any higher res logos and won't have them by the deadline.

It's uploaded here as it's several pages and I didn't want your browser window to be 8000px long. :)

C&C welcomed.

http://s636.photobucket.com/albums/uu81/immrjones/understand/

*May be NSFW as it has some animations for plastic surgeons (for you perverts, that means there are some minor boob shots.) I forgot this originally so if a mod thinks it should be in title, let me know.)

Audentia
02-26-2009, 10:04 PM
My first impressions... wow that is busy cover and it looks like powerpoint slides.
After looking further I wondered if your contact information wasn't a bit too anemic on the blue... and along with the white dots (I think this is what they are hard to tell) that are cluttering the bottom of the page. I might clean it and make it a bit more simple. The flow of the book however seems to make sense.

kevincdg
02-26-2009, 10:07 PM
Yea, the cover actually isn't my design work -- it's pulled from a magazine ad that they did and they wanted it to be the cover. My original solution to try and make it more interesting though, was a lenticular (3d depth) print job, where the tiles would all on different layers so it'd give you the 3D feel, since that's what they do. however, that will take too long so we're doing it on the next round.

thanks for the critique on the bottom, i'll see what i can do.

Sidewinder
02-27-2009, 01:24 AM
meh; thought I had a joke here...

shmoo
02-27-2009, 03:24 AM
I think its lovely.
Only things I picked out at a glance..

The contact info in the footer is hard to read
The "digitized" page - the paragraph seems more space than the others? I find it harder to read.
The page with the percentages on it, I don't like the larger tinted text behind the numbers - but thats just my preference.

I think it looks quiet nice and clean :)

CMYK girl
02-27-2009, 04:01 AM
Yes very nice, clean and straight forward, good job.

kevincdg
03-02-2009, 05:17 PM
thanks! addressed he contact information and a few minor tweaks as well. any other suggestions before sending to press?

gracias