Project critique needed, please help all.

[Link]

Hi all, I am working on a new project—a PDF article. What I need to know is if you can follow the story from page to page, do you get lost and any overall comments. The goal is to have a product that you would download, view on screen then print and put in a binder for reference. Currently all links are inactive, also you must use acrobats page advance keys to move to the next page. A built in page navigation will be added later to allow readers to hop around from page to page.

Any thoughts on this would be greatly appreciated.