My Business Card

[swilsonjr]

I've been following the site for a while now but I've never posted before. I figure I should start somewhere.

Here's my new business card up for critique:

http://theusualsonline.com/designs/business_card_blur.jpg

Thanks /emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Woo hoo! We live to suck another day.

[beanz]

I like the design, it looks good! ;)

Although, i'm not sure why you've concentrated on the 'jr' for the logo!?! I'm sure you have your reasons though...

http://sighost.fuelie.org/accounts/beanz/beanz_17.jpg

http://dabeanz.deviantart.com

[REG]

Yes, I think the same, maybe the 'jr' is too big.

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[defjoe]

I do like the J and R and how they fit. but I don't get it? you working off the Junior?

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[swilsonjr]

Can't explain why.... I've been using it for so long I honestly don't know. I like the way it looks though and it works for me.

It's something people remember I guess.

Woo hoo! We live to suck another day.

[morea]

I like it. I like the colors. I like the simplicity. It's memorable to me.

Only thing I worry about is that it will probably cost more to print a card with full bleeds. /emoticons/tongue.gif

I refuse to have a battle of wits with someone who is unarmed.

[pari purohit]

its an interesting card though it reminds me too much of an ad for a citrus drink or candy.
something about it looks very digital and less personalised...

[YNOT]

I really like the layout , colors and fonts, very nicely done. I have only one comment, and maybe I'm just being too picky, but I think the space between the 'j' and the 'r' should be consistant. I don't know if I am explaining it well, but where they swoop over to the right they are closer than at the top and bottom. Maybe I'm being too anal but that would be my one thing I would suggest.

Keep up the nice work!

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[swilsonjr]

^^^^

I noticed that too. It's been fixed. Thanks. /emoticons/icon_biggrin.gif

Woo hoo! We live to suck another day.

[MikeTheVike]

I like it! I think your name should stand out more though...maybe make the green/yellow gradient in the back reversed, so there is more contrast with the background and your name.