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Icephoenix
01-24-2005, 08:30 AM
Hi, I'm new here and not really what I'd call a professional, but I've been dabbing in graphic arts a little for various purposes. Here is a logo I made for a fictional company called BioLinks, from a book. I was hoping for feedback, cheers. :)
It will be perfect if you change the 'n' to an 'N'. Nothing more. Nice logo.
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Silence04
01-24-2005, 10:51 AM
yeah, nice logo. i'd lose the inner shadow though, may get muddy looking as smaller sizes.
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beanz
01-24-2005, 03:41 PM
It looks good, but if you hadn't said the name it would've taken some serious thought to work it out... Or is that just me!?! :P
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TBdesign
01-24-2005, 07:39 PM
I see two logos in one, I see Bnlks, and then the circle as seperate. Getting there but i think you need to rewrok it, go back to the drawing board and sketch. And work in B/W first
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D-Frag
01-24-2005, 09:25 PM
my only word of caution would be to make it vector. right now with the shadowing on the text I can tell its in PS...
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I agree with beanz... I tried to read the name before I read what it actually was, would have never known it was 2 words.
Maybe if you actually had the 'i''s there in the same shape as the circle, but in a tint of either of the colours you used.
I also agree with TB, you should ALWAYS begin logos in black and white.
Otherwise, great start!
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TBdesign
01-25-2005, 12:21 AM
Yah, D-frag is right.
Now that I looked at it closer, get out of photoshop, and work vector.
Start on paper, then go to comp.
defjoe
01-25-2005, 07:57 AM
yep I lose the i's also.
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Icephoenix
01-25-2005, 04:42 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys, much appreciated :D The first version had the circle around the 'o' and the 'l' as full and no lines, so you couldn't really tell they were meant to be 'i's. After a few people commented I added in the cuts. Ah well slowly but surely, cheers! /emoticons/thumbsup.gif