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WR
01-24-2005, 07:36 PM
a boring day at school today so i decided to come home. bored at home to so i bumped up a few layouts for my current project. just want to know what you guys thinks

feel free to comment in anyway and suggestions also welcome! i havnt decided on the type yet but will start work on that ASAP like when i get the perfect layout ready for it. i had a go at some type in class today, looks ok. please comment on that too and again, suggestions are more than welcome!

heres the project brief if your wondering whats it all about...http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/abdulrehman/Brief.jpgand this is the poem - you'll need it to understand aswel... http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/abdulrehman/Poem.jpg

thanks!



Post Edited (Weapon R) : 1/24/2005 3:50:14 PM GMT

WR
01-24-2005, 08:09 PM
i noticed there was something wrong with the last one, the flame layout. here it is scanned in... dont know why i doesnt work there!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v260/abdulrehman/Untitled-3.jpg