t-shirt design - critiques wanted

[stalkerju]

please look at my design for t-shirt -> image link (http://www.***************/submission/32253/cri_de_coeur)

it is for threadless (http://www.***************/?streetteam=stalkerju)

please comment with criticism - i am new in this kind of design and want to know what i do wrong.

thank you!

Post Edited (stalkerju) : 1/31/2005 11:46:26 AM GMT

[plantationfarmer]

a scared ghost? or is it in agony? very cute illustraation although the details could be fine tuned.
love your presentation of the design. nice illy of the lady wearing the tee..


sorry. but has the showcase board become a link to vote threadless tees? ive seen quite a few 'check out my threadless tees' posts popping up. a little bit of it is fine, but its starting to irritate me a little.

nothing against you though, stalkerju. =)

eh?

[stalkerju]

thank you!!!

about self-promotion of threadless submissions - i'm not expecting for scores - if i wanted i could wrote 'vote me! yay!' - but i didn't. i expect for critique - real and hard - i want to learn how to do design for t-shirts, to know what i do wrong. that's all.

[Drorain]

Its a great and fun image, the sweat mark on the ghost is really whats bothering me a little, I think its breaking up a little to much for me? that sound right?

http://www.grivakisgraphics.com/images/img_logomark.jpg

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[stalkerju]

Drorain, thank you!