my new business card

[lesrandall]

any pointers or opinions will be appreciated the cards will be 12pt stock satin finish with spot varnish


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http://www.lesrandall.com

[swank60]

I would change 'apt. 505' to something else - something that doens't sound like you work from home - even if you do, and that's fine, but you don't want to approach someone with that sort of personal info on your card. Are you expecting clients to visit your location? Or do you go to them? Maybe you could just use '#505' - something a little more vague. Perception and first impressions are everything.

Are you comfortable enough leaving off the address and just having phone, email and web address?

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[TBdesign]

You're getting there a few things,
Check punctuation on blvd there is no period or comma and everything else has correct punctuation.
Check your size of the @ symbol play with the kerning and tracking of it. Its seems a little big.
lesrandall on the logo and lesrandall on the website do not follow the same color scheme, logo is black red, website is red black.

Not a fan of the website placed there. Deffinatley take out the www.
I think the website is tracked out a bit to much to. It could maybe go on the back?
Or put your email and website sperate from address, or if you even need the web adress cuz it is in your email? a few ideas

looking good, just a few things to work out

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[daleharris]

les, i like the back of the card better than the front - especially the spot varnish! i would make the logo on the front of the card smaller than the one on the back and i should say that frederick would have a fit if he saw you letterspacing that lowercase like that...

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Post Edited (daleharris) : 2/5/2005 3:01:35 PM GMT

[thelobst]

I would be careful with the bands across the top and bottom of the front. They look good but if the trimmimg is slightly off it will be noticeable