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untoldstarsflow
04-14-2005, 02:56 AM
Ok guys and girls here's the new meat for you guys to "stab Up"http://www.graphicdesignforum.com/DesktopModules/dotNetBB/emoticons/biggrin.gif just playing. Give your thoughts on this one and compare it with the old.

EC
04-14-2005, 09:07 AM
Much more bettah. I think you might be able to bump that type down just a smidge and maybe increase the leading a tad if you wanna continue playing.

It's a nice card. Well done.

EC
04-14-2005, 09:09 AM
I'm back. I always do this. lol

Try aligning the bottom type with the left edge of the line under 'sales' ...

untoldstarsflow
04-14-2005, 05:10 PM
Ok here it is again with words align and all. Thanks for the advice, what do you think?http://www.graphicdesignforum.com/DesktopModules/dotNetBB/emoticons/eyecrazy.gif

untoldstarsflow
04-14-2005, 05:29 PM
I seem to posting alot of these business cards lately....any ways here's one were I add just a few small touches using only my eyess.http://www.graphicdesignforum.com/DesktopModules/dotNetBB/emoticons/eyecrazy.gif Cut it up and tell me how it tastes.

untoldstarsflow
04-14-2005, 05:34 PM
NOooooo. Don't eat that one it's full of flys. Well as you can tell the last one that I posted just had a small little problem that I have now fixed! <:)