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venuvu
04-27-2005, 03:50 PM
hi, this is the logo i come up with for "future foundation" which is Social Service foundation (NGO Organisation) who supports children.
please comment and suggest good color scheams for this kind of logos.

thanks

Bobbysky
04-27-2005, 03:59 PM
The one that jumped out at me the most was the number 3 on the first set. But the type is no good. You need something that flows with the clean lines of the person. But I would work with that one or even the next one with the box around it.

DeleteYourself
04-27-2005, 04:03 PM
I agree, number #3 is the best so far, but I really dig #1, as well. The type could definately be a bit more dynamic. Make people really take notice. The image is so compelling, the text needs to be a good compliment.

I don't really understand the purpose of the poll...

G-Man79
04-27-2005, 04:15 PM
I agree with Bobby & Delete. Number 1 & 3 from the first set are the best. I think if you used the font from #4 in the first set in #3, you might have something. From an artistic p.o.v. the figure in #1 is much more interesting that the #3. I've seen a lot of those sharp swooshy figures on template sites etc. Just my .02. Looking good so far. Post a revision when you have one ready!

Kink
04-27-2005, 04:30 PM
I really liked the #1!! the others seemed either too childish or things I've seen before!

Hendo
04-27-2005, 05:00 PM
I agree with Bobbysky. logo #3 is the best with a new font for the tagline. Something a little more professional. Good job on the logos.

mariana
04-27-2005, 06:19 PM
Personally, I like no.1. I do think 3 is a bit more "professional", but I also think that it gets lost in the masses of 'professional' logos.

I would suggest using a different colour. The pink and the butterfly are both really feminine, and I'm guessing (social justice and children?) you're catering to a larger audience. Other thoughts: would it look good without the antanea? maybe a sleeker font? and 'transforming lives' is really tiny...

It's a really distinct and artistic logo.

Mariana

keith1
04-27-2005, 07:14 PM
Me three. I like number one. It's the most original. I would change that pink color too and the font, maybe something cleaner like the one used in #4. I do like number 3 & 4 also but like mariana & kink said it looks like something we've all seen before. I do like the kids with ballons ones also.

defjoe
04-27-2005, 07:51 PM
#3 works the best for me.

PeterA
04-27-2005, 08:00 PM
I vote for no.1. I like those heart shaped butterfly wings! Eventhough I like type, too, design no.9 has a pretty and eye catchy font, either. Nice work!

chriscrooz
04-29-2005, 08:07 PM
Mine would have to be 3 or 4. I like how 4 is filled but in some ways it seems a bit hard to see w/ definition. Hope that helps.

9iron
04-29-2005, 10:22 PM
I like #1 with a brighter color on the critter!