Transport Logo, dawn ring

[ikyut]

My client insist to put a ring on his logo, well, check and choose the one you think works better.
Hope you like it, but it´s not to mucho stuff mis amigos!!!

Thanks in advance

ikyut

[uncle carbunkle]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v668/unclecarbunkle/videla.gif

[ikyut]

Cool auncle, thanks a lot for the clear reply. I forgot to add some numbers. JA

[uncle carbunkle]

the more i look at it, the more i like the bottom of the two that i chose.

[ikyut]

Yeah I agree, is my favorite one.

One color and you can read the name very clear....

[D-Zine]

I'm with Uncle on her choice. Thats the one i was drawn to.

[petchy]

I agree with the majority! the bottom left logo is more balanced than the others in terms of the size of the text vs the size of the swoosh. good work though!

[Ulysses]

The bottom-right logo would look perfect on a bar of soap or toilet paper packaging. I'd also settle with uncle's two choices, but cannot determine which is more appropriate for the transport company, without a better understanding of their background.

For a more reliable and friendly transport logo, I'd settle for the 2-tone version being that it is more subtle and clean (like fresh air almost), where as the other one is more confined and rigid (almost chizzled in quality).

[beano]

Bottom left for me too.. ;)

[Allen Harkleroad]

center logo (2 piece swooshs)

[defjoe]

I like the 2nd one from Unks 2. just seems to flow well. but I think they all work on some level. Good job.

[jamodu]

Yep, thats the one that my eye was drawn to as well. Pretty nice for a swoosh :)

[ikyut]

Hey buddies, thanks for all the suggestions and comments. I hope my client likes the logo.

Thanks again for your time and greats critiques.

See you , mis amigos...

ikyut the Argento designer...

[Bobbysky]

bottom left works the best. The one problem with the type on all of the logos resides in between D&E, you need to tighten up the kerning. Then it will be good, but right now there is kind of a gap there that doesn't look right. The swoosh ones are okay but just seems like I see it a lot.

Oh by the way it's TYPOGRAPHY, not tipography. I assume that your a spanish speaker predominantly, but your english is quite well. Thanks for your crit on my thread as well. I posting some new images today.

[ikyut]

Bobbysky: you are rigth... the kerning on the D and E is wrong...

I appreciate your correction, my rusty writing is not the best of the forum, but I´m lubricating it, and improving it with the time...

Thanks vato.

[ikyut]

thats all i hope you like it.


ikyut

[chriscrooz]

I'd have to agree with Allen on this one, I really like the Middle one of the first set of images you put up. I think the two tone swoosh really stands out and looks really clean. Good work.

[chriscrooz]

Actually I took some more time to look at it and I guess I take it back and state that the one you're talkin' about is more interesting. The two tone blue swoosh seemed to be missing something so when I was looking at it it seemed to not be complete for some reason.

[ikyut]

Thanks a lot Chris. I agree, some thing happend with me after some time i started to find the left down more interesting and the center one more weak and uncomplete.


thanks again