Final V

[Studio 7]

i hope this to be my final design.

what do you think?

http://www.marcorchard.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/Site%20Pages/index.html

look around, under portfolio only "works" is a working link.
and the main banner image is from adobe stock dose that matter?


if you hate it please tell me :D and if you like it could you be kind enough to sign my guest book:rolleyes:

thx ^.^

[Studio 7]

come on it cant be that bad :(

[keith1]

I like it. I think it's clean and easy to navigate. I would definitely change the links font and use that 8-bit font that you use for your "all rights reserved text". I really like the layout of the frontpage but I think you should use a photo that you took or maybe one of your designs instead of the stock photo.

[uncle carbunkle]

site is fine. i would look at your portfolio navigation though. i get annoyed when i have to press the back button, or if there isn't some easier navigation for me on the page.

also, look at the bottom of your page in 'links'. it should either be 100% height, like the rest of your pages, or have a drop shadow.

woohoo!

[uncle carbunkle]

oh - but what the heck does "don't let desire cloud inspiration" mean? are you a monk? ;)

[Studio 7]

lol, na im not a monk.. i just used some of the txt from my english peom exercise,
the links page is smaller because there is no content over 2 lines big (its a prob i cant over come)

but thx for the comments :D I appreciate and enjoy feedback. as for the nav font i will change it soon and rework my portfolio concept.

[tZ]

I'm not a fan of the whole photo thing sorry.

Maybe if looked a bit more realistic then a fake "made up" atmosphere i would go more for it. I mean the photo has a very naturalistic presence but, the general atmosphere just doesn't look like it exist. I think thats what is bothering me with the whole photo thing.

I would suggest a interesting photo of yourself or something. Maybe not of your self but a cropped dramatic image or something.

I would also make the photo smaller (height wise) cause it is obscuring my eye from the text on the site. Since, the information i assume is the most important aspect i would definatkly rethink the size cause clarity is a key importance, in this instance.