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  • Brodero
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    Brodero
    I would say take it to be on the safe side. You never know if you might interview with anyone other then the creative director and they may not have seen your work online. Always better to be over prepared...
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    Print portfolio to interview?
    frutiger
    I have an interview on Wednesday and was wondering whether or not I should take a print portfolio. I've already had a phone interview with the creative director and he has already seen my online portfolio....
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    Hi Logan and welcome to GDF.

    We ask all new members to read very important links here and here. These explain the rules, how the forum runs and a few inside jokes. No, you haven't done...
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    That's a by-product of clean machine-assisted design. Everything in the Adobe programs is so cookie-cutter precise. It was immediately noticeable in my college design class where we were doing everything...
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  • #2
    Congrats! It all looks kosher
    It is more fun to talk with someone who doesn't use long, difficult words but rather short, easy words like "What about lunch?" – Winnie the Pooh

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    • #3
      Congrats! Beautiful work!
      Sketching not only helps you work out good ideas, it helps you get past the bad ones.

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      • #4
        Typography seems weak, good concept tho hahaha

        Of course I'm just kidding, congrats!

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        • #5
          I'm sure it will look lovely in small size, then as it enlarges (use the "bottle of milk" tool in the "Nurturing foods" menu) it will put a lot of CMYK in your life.

          Congratulations
          "There is hope in honest error; none in the icy perfections of the mere stylist."
          C.R.M.

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          • #6
            Originally posted by CW Jones View Post
            Typography seems weak, good concept tho hahaha

            Of course I'm just kidding, congrats!
            You're killing me!
            It is more fun to talk with someone who doesn't use long, difficult words but rather short, easy words like "What about lunch?" – Winnie the Pooh

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            • #7
              Hey! Congratulations Martyn! I'm very happy for you and your wife.
              This post is brought to you by the letter E and the number 9. Those are the buttons I push to get a Twix out of the candy machine.
              "I put my heart and my soul into my work, and have lost my mind in the process."

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              • #8
                Reduced at smaller sizes I think you're going to lose a lot of the detail. I like how you started this out in Black and White though. Better to get a good strong mark before adding colour.



                Congrats!
                Less marketing douchebaggery, MORE TANKS!

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                • #9
                  Yarrr... that be indeed a fine lookin little crewmate. Ya done well mate!

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                  • #10
                    HOOORAY!!!! So happy for you guys!!!
                    Typos are very important to all written form. It gives the reader something to look for so they aren't distracted by the total lack of content in your writing.
                    - Randy K. Milholland

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                    • #11
                      ARRRRR! What a fine piece of work!
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                      Burn the land and boil the sea, you can't take the sky from me.

                      blog/portfolio

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                      • #12
                        i think we need a little more background on this first. I'd be interested to know how you made this, and what you made it in. Almost looks like something you'd have found from a tutorial page....Or are you using it to make your own "how-to" tutorial? If that's the case, you should share it on here.

                        The only thing I'm struggling with is the message. What's your call to action? Who's the target market? It almost seems like you did this just to show off, or to just be cocky (for lack of a better term).

                        Either way, it's off to a great start. I think a little more time developing it, and it should be a pretty solid finish! Congrats on getting it to this point tho.
                        Art is always and everywhere the secret confession, and at the same time the immortal movement of its time.
                        | Karl Marx |


                        A desperate disease requires a dangerous remedy.
                        | Guy Fawkes |


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                        • #13
                          Congratulations!

                          If you think deadlines are tight now, be aware time seems to flow at twice the speed once you have a child.
                          Design is not decoration.

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                          • #14
                            Originally posted by Bladez View Post
                            i think we need a little more background on this first. I'd be interested to know how you made this, and what you made it in. Almost looks like something you'd have found from a tutorial page....Or are you using it to make your own "how-to" tutorial? If that's the case, you should share it on here.

                            The only thing I'm struggling with is the message. What's your call to action? Who's the target market? It almost seems like you did this just to show off, or to just be cocky (for lack of a better term).

                            Either way, it's off to a great start. I think a little more time developing it, and it should be a pretty solid finish! Congrats on getting it to this point tho.
                            Going the distance my friend.

                            Less marketing douchebaggery, MORE TANKS!

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                            • #15
                              Congrats!
                              Shop smart. Shop S-Mart.

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