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    Ladies and gentlemen, please take a look on this site :

  • #2
    i had to scrool a little in the middle window
    it was very confusing
    i felt lost
    i left early

    i think you missed the train.
    my .02
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    • #3
      lots of crazy stuff going on.
      I would suggest incorporating all of your content into one window, those frames are confusing.

      I do however like the dancing naked ladies.


      • #4
        Dang. I thought you just needed an opinion. Like, your feet stink. Or, Charlize Theron needs to date more middle aged graphic designers. That sort of thing.

        Ah well.


        • #5
          why doesn't that man have genitalia?
          Less be more.


          • #6
            What is it that you want from this critique? What is this that we're looking at and what's up with the terminator family (T-1000?) up top? Are these supposed to be banners?


            • #7
              Your borders are messed up on the frames. Your flash content is extending outside the blue lines.

              The first thing that came to mind when I saw the naked, genitalia-less kids running around was "uh oh it's a kiddy porn site! Danger! Danger!"

              The site is really confusing with the 3 different windows.
              You want it when!? Well in that case, let me pull my magic wand out of my ass and take care of that for you.


              • #8
                1. You have some good illustration skillls.

                2. Your design and coding skills need work.


                • #9
                  I'm seeing red...

                  A whole lot which is almost blinding.

                  Furthermore... I mean not to cramp your style but, I'm just not digging the animation you have going on. Seems like it was just thrown there.

                  I would work on your web skills... perhaps learn some coding.

                  Your text I can barly read... the text that comes up with the images. Then I realized it was a image... and yeah.






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