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    Hi everyone, I hope you are having a nice Sunday!

    I had to do a 2D and 3D design for my school. I would like some feedback for my work.

    Would you agree that my skateboard design is 3D?
    I have decided to make it black and white as Pause Noire means Black Pause (break).
    I actually made this sign in real life, couple of month ago, except that the logo was made of multicolour Acrylic paint that I applied with a tooth brush through a stencil. Anyway, I thought Black and white was more readable.

    What do you think of the Biz Card?
    Again, I have decided to go black and white. I made this business card design couple of month ago and I got it printed.
    I have printed only a couple as I will change the email address during this year when I will finish my new website.

    Do you think going black and white would be an issue? I have some (coloured) work in my portfolio though...
    Thanks for your help.

    Antoine Pause Noire

    Ps I wish I was writing this from the Chesterfield couch. Looks real cool...

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    I'm not going to agree your lobby sign is 3D.
    You've basically built your sign board out of skateboards. The logo itself is 2D painted on the surface of the signboard.

    Here are some examples of simple 3D sign art for lobbies.
    https://www.google.com/search?q=3D+l...w=1257&bih=628

    I would certainly ditch the idea of a light bulb for a logo for a designer. Way, WAY too cliche.

    The logo on the card... first, have a look at those lobby logos above. Do you know how large those strokes would have to be to back light something like that? Even in plastic or metal one would be hard pressed to put studs into that to hold it up.
    It also reads almost perfectly as P M, rather than P N.

    Nothing wrong with black and white for a business card, but I will ask, ''how did they look when printed?''
    White type that small tends to fill in quite a bit when knocked out of what appears to be a 4-color black. Are the letters sharp and clear?
    If not, it reflects poorly on your choices.
    Looks more like a card for a photographer than a designer but you say you are an artist as well so it may fly. Did you take the photo?
    Last edited by PrintDriver; 02-12-2017, 06:42 AM.

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    • #3
      Hi Pause and welcome to GDF.

      We ask all new members to read very important links here and here. These explain the rules, how the forum runs and a few inside jokes. No, you haven't done anything wrong, we ask every new member to read them. Your first few posts will be moderated, so don't panic if they don't show up immediately. Enjoy your stay.
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      • #4
        On Your Business Card everything looks so big.

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