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    Hello,
    My name is Georgi and I am not a designer but currently I am designing a header for an email.
    Email is dedicated to shops (business to business). I need advices and opinions. I attached, what I have now.
    The most important topics to discuss:
    • Saturation/level of Magenta side
    • Text position
    • Empty space
    I dislike the part beginning with "Buy" and ending with "September". How can I make it better/redo?

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    Hi Georgi and welcome to GDF.

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    • #3
      Might try proofreading.
      ''it'' or ''out''?
      I wouldn't consider ''/piece'' to be part of the justification you are using. The ''only'' is hanging out there in space over that huge $3.

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        PrintDriver What do you think?
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        • #5
          Are you in the US?
          The $ comes before the number.......
          And I might say ''$3 each'' rather than ''/piece''.

          The other thing about having all this info in an image? I have email image auto-downloads disabled on my computer as an overall corporate protocol where I work. Even on stuff that isn't labeled as spam. We can click a button to download them. I wonder how common that is.

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          • #6
            PrintDriver Thank you for your advice! I am from Estonia and this is my first Email marketing experience. You were really helpful. I appreciate your help.

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            • #7
              Soviet Christmas ornaments.

              What are they like? Hammers and sickles to hang on the tree? Little Christmas bulbs shaped like Lenin's and Stalin's heads? I thought the Soviet Communists were all atheists. What were they doing making Christmas ornaments?

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              • Georgi S.
                Georgi S. commented
                Editing a comment
                They actually made lots of ornaments during the Soviet times. They are all really different - fruits, characters, stars and so on...

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