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    ​Hi Everyone! I am a student studying Graphic Design and for an assignment we have to create a personal logo for ourselves and apply that logo to business cards, letterheads, etc. I'd really appreciate it if anyone could give me some feedback about my design! Please be harsh on me so that I can improve my design!

    Thank you so much for your help! Click image for larger version

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  • #2
    Yay for business cards and letterheads.
    It's killing me how much graphic design is stuck in the past with these assignments.
    Go one step further and do up a brand standard in addition to this.

    Is it E i C or is it EC?
    Why do you put boxes around your contact info that have no real purpose and don't seem to work on any sort of grid?
    Is the logo always on the orange background?
    Is the orange background always a rectangle of business card proportions?


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    • ec33
      ec33 commented
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      Okay, I will change the formatting of the boxes and adjust the vertical line so that the EC is more clear. Thank you so much for your help PrintDriver!

  • #3
    I kind of like it, but you'll never run into a real-life business card with that little information. Your card design has a place for your name, but doesn't say a word about what kind of business or service lies behind the business card, which is sort of the whole point of a business card. Business cards need to look nice, but their reason for being comes first, aesthetics come after that and serves a supporting role. You know, the whole form follows function thing.

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    • #4
      Have tried to entwine the two letters?
      Also having a bottom description of the business might be useful and make things easier.

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      • #5
        Hi ec33 and welcome to GDF.

        I moved your thread to the student forum. You will get more appropriate feedback here.

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