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Member- Nov 2003
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early bird mock-up web design suggestion for client ?
inspired by artofadambetts, wi' yar say? [img]/emoticons/jumpin.gif[/img]
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The Boss
- Oct 2002
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Overall I think it looks great. The company name to me is kind of lost in all the shiny bits and the reflective bits. Maybe make it a bit bigger and get rid of the camera jammed up against the left side. Also you may want to throw an 'A' into the middle of 'Catalog' under the name. [img]/emoticons/cool.gif[/img]
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- Jun 2004
- 7
How will it be implemented? And how will you minimize loading time?
The white shadows of the text also seem a bit odd - it makes it look a bit like my vision's blurring. Maybe try darker shadows?
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- Nov 2003
- 63
It'll have product listings, etc right the way down the middle. I should have showed this, but haven't got to that yet. Well the white 'shadows' are supposed to be subtle [mirror-like] reflections. Like, making the background appear glossy/shiny. Do you not think this works?
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Kinda Cranky
- Jul 2003
- 2375
yeah thats alot of graphics
if your text runs long where will the page stretch at?
I might would take the white shadows (white blurry mirror reflections) the rental catalog and the navigation ones out they are a bit much....
and the page could be tighter vertically
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I belong somewhere else
- Aug 2003
- 10480
The overall design is nice. I would move the company name to the right just a tad so there is a little space between it and the camera. Right now its just nudging the 'D'
Curious to see how your copy flows into this...post updates for us!
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Member
- Nov 2003
- 63
ok D-Zine[img]/emoticons/worshippy.gif[/img] u asked for it: www.masteratwork.com/clientele/duallcamera/ includes the copy [img]/emoticons/icon_surprised.gif[/img]
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I belong somewhere else
- Aug 2003
- 10480
that's a pretty nice and clean layout you have there! Readable, doesn't hurt my eyes. Good work. It's a little long but there really isn't much you can do about that since you have to get all the info in. I like it!'
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