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I like the logo. The photo of you is very good. Overall, looks like you've put a lot of work in and I'm sure you'll go a long way. You probably already know way more than me!
A few things that might help: the 'links' on your link page don't seem to work.
You might be able to tidy up the coding behind your site a bit by thinking a bit more about the css. For example I think you are duplicating a lot of attributes for html tags?
The text for the main nav bar is a little bit small and hard to read for me (monitor @ 1024x768).
Few minor points about the English - 'Here my life' and 'here my past' for example
http://www.jackfruitdesign.com/
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Ahhh nice site, love the intro and color scheme. One suggestion from me though, in your portfolio section. lose everything that is not work related. People don't want to look through random drawings and just random images in PS, people want to see tried and true design, I like the websites you have in there, keep those, but lose about 80% of the rest of the stuff because it is nothing that will get you hired. But it is your site, if you just want to show off your work to friends so be it, but an employer wont sift throught that much stuff. Welcome to the GDF, thats my crit for the day : )
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Here my life ==> This monthany suggestions?
Here my past ==> Archives
http://www.jackfruitdesign.com/
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Why doesn't the quote code work anyway?
http://www.jackfruitdesign.com/Ben said...
What am I doing wrong?
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Ah, I see, only the 'name' version works
http://www.jackfruitdesign.com/Ben said...
Sorry for cluttering up this thread
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I CANT BELIEVE YOU SENT ME AN ADVERTISEMENT FOR YOUR FORUM IN PM!!
mods: i'd totally kill this thread/guy's acct.
seriously. advertising is pancakeing stupid.
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r_shahin your pretty new here and being that first you posted your site I'm going to just give you a warning instead of banning you.
No Advertising, ANYTHING!
I see how you say it's a personal invitation which it fine but it's to another forum and to be honest I don't have a problem with other Graphic Design Forums but as a new member here you don't want to start off on the wrong foot.
So no more PM invitations to your forum as least until your an established member. I can understand how you would want personal feedback in your site but your walking a thin line for the fact that we don’t know you.Comment
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Delete your sig. r_shahin your advertising man. I'm telling you Allen will band you and if he asked I'm going to have to band you.r_shahin said...
Seems like I've done sumin really wrong
I apologize anyways 
Just get ride of it.
Sorry but this is the last warning. I would hate to see a noob go especially cause I know your a designer. Rules are rules bro.Comment
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Today, 12:38 AMCommented to Copy/Paste-in-place isn't quite rightGood luck Bladez. If you do figure it out please let us know!
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Today, 12:30 AMCommented to Client wants something silly.Buda edited it for you.
Like the forum FAQ says, you have a very limited amount of time to edit your posts, 15 minutes to an hour, depending on when the servers cycle. -
Today, 12:17 AMCommented to WhiskersAre we talking about whiskers for jeans?
As in these:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Whiskers
for these:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jeans
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Today, 12:13 AMCommented to Please critique my website and portfolioNice work, but I can only see 1 view for each project. The mult-page stuff really should show in full (all pages) or a few of your favourite spreads. A couple of lines of information, (no more than 4...
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Yesterday, 11:51 PMCommented to Wo kann man schnell Logodesign lernen?Looks right from here...
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Yesterday, 11:49 PMCommented to Font Help pleaseYou're welcome...
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Yesterday, 11:47 PMCommented to Client wants something silly.And for some reason I can not edit my posts like I used to be able too?
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Yesterday, 11:40 PMCommented to Wo kann man schnell Logodesign lernen?Gawd, that didn't work out so well
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