my new flyer

defjoe · 06-26-2004, 12:03 AM

Is that you? might want to drop the girl...cause it looks like a porno ad.

'I will become the most powerful Jedi ever!'

rjphotograph · 06-26-2004, 12:11 AM

no its not me its one of my models, Its does oh jesh....what about the font

uncle carbunkle · 06-26-2004, 12:14 AM

start with your text. if it's not 100% readable, you're wasting your time and money. don't make something important transparent - defeats the purpose.

if you want to display a photograph, choose your best one and then decide how it should be laid out - the whole flyer or perhaps you 'box it in' somehow...

keep it simple. i have a feeling that you're trying to put SUPERzing into the flyer without being 100% sure what you want it to look like.

HEY DEFJOE! was that a come on?

greetings, earthlings. take me to your dealer.

D-Frag · 06-26-2004, 12:17 AM

go to elance.com and take a look at some of the designers work, always gets my juices flowin!!

rjphotograph · 06-26-2004, 02:38 AM

its giving me some great ideas, im working on a new look i will post it when im done, but if anyone has suggestions feel free, THANKS GUYS

rjphotograph · 06-26-2004, 03:01 AM

ok here is the revised copy I used your suggestion and put pictures in a box...tell me how this looks

defjoe · 06-26-2004, 03:25 AM

much better...do you have a non-model shot. Like a nature shot or something. i'm only saying this cause if this is an eFlyer you don't want people to think it is spam.

'I will become the most powerful Jedi ever!'

rjphotograph · 06-26-2004, 04:44 AM

WELL ACTUALLY THIS IS GOING TO BE PRINTED, ON THE BACK OF A CLUB FLYERS, ACTUALLY I CHANGED IT AGAIN, GESH I AM TOOO PICKY

IM GLAD YOU GUYS LIKE IT BETTER I WILL POST MY NEW ONE AGAIN SOMETIME I DONT WANT TO BORE EVERYONE WITH ALL MY FLYERS LOL

D-Frag · 06-26-2004, 05:46 AM

And while your changing stuff, you always wanna make sure that your contact info is one of the main focuses, you want people to be able to get a hold of you easily. Im not saying go over the top, but definetly make it extremely legible. Looking good though on the second one.

rjphotograph · 06-26-2004, 05:54 AM

Thank you I was thinking that too, because it isnt that noticeable

rjphotograph · 06-26-2004, 05:58 AM

final results!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks team let me know what you think

**Kool** · 06-26-2004, 08:13 AM

I like the final one.

RJ, instead of outlining your fonts to make them stand out from a multicolored background. Try duplicating your text layer and just shifting the bottom layer a bit to the side and down. Make the top layer white and the bottom black or viseversa. It will highlight it without the distortion you get with outlines. [img]/emoticons/cool.gif[/img]

'I used to be with it. But then they changed what it was. Now what I'm with isn't it, and what's it seems weird and scary to me.' Abraham Simpson

D-Frag · 06-26-2004, 08:45 AM

And another suggestion, if its photography that you want to show off, I think you should find some better images then the girl, don't get me wrong shes nice, but it doesn't scream photography...well maybe studio photography, but thats it. Hope that helps.

Mirror · 06-28-2004, 12:50 PM

Feel not good seeing water on her face.

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