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  • Help with Logo and TM for Craftsman Jeweler

    Hello all,

    I'm not a graphic designer, but I've been around enough of you to know I have a problem and would appreciate some feedback. The line art for everything can be found here.

    Background:

    Our store is John Paul's Jewelers and I come from a long line of bench jewelers, or 'benchies'. "John Paul's" has a brand recognition as a craftsman jeweler, but not as a retail jeweler. Whenever we make something, we have to stamp it with a hallmark and a maker's mark. We basically sign our name next to the metal purity and it works a lot like a trademark. Our mark is a "J" merged with a "P" and has a good brand identity with customers, but is unidentifiable to the general public.


    (maker's mark)


    Goal:

    People think of us when they want something made or fixed, but not to buy. I wanted people to think of us for everything. First me and my brother renovated an old bank and built some nice showcases so we had a real showroom. Then I redid the logo and started a new advertising campaign. FYI, "Jewelers" is superfluous. We are commonly known as "John Paul's".


    (redesigned logo)
    Problem:

    The logo and mark don't tie in with each other:

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    (logo + maker's mark)

    It's really a problem with single color:

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    I'm trying to create a die for some watches, but can't find a single color version I'm happy with. The mark could be changed, but it would be difficult and there is a lot of loyalty built into it. The logo is a different story altogether. For most of our existence, we didn't have a logo so there's little visual recognition.

    Any help is appreciated.



  • #2
    The mark you have should not be changed. Nor should it be covered up with other junk.
    Don't outline your font with skinny black lines.
    The all caps isn't working. Mostly because I don't think that is a small caps font. Could be, but the first letters J and P are overpowering the other letters.

    The top left is working best but if you are not married to that font, I'd consider others and maybe dropping them down below the bowl of the P

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    • #3
      I can't see your original logo, the first two images aren't appearing for me.

      I echo everything PD said.

      And also, you might rethink your font styles overall. There are designers who will disagree and say you need five different fonts, but unless you REALLY know what you're doing, stick to one or two. To be honest, I don't like any of your fonts, they just don't say "craftsman" or "high quality" to me. A good rule of thumb when using more than one font is to make sure there's good contrast. (i.e. Your logo is a serif font, your tagline is also a serif font - change that to a sans serif and it'll feel more professional.)

      Here's a good list of fonts professional designers use that you can't go wrong with https://pbs.twimg.com/media/CBni6MZVIAET1tc.png:large

      I know you didn't come here for a critique on that, but I do hope that helps!

      Last edited by EC; 05-04-2017, 03:15 AM.
      You can fool some of the people all the time, and those are the ones you want to concentrate on. --GWB

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      • #4
        First is working best.

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        • #5
          Hi EricM81 and welcome to GDF.

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          • #6
            I appreciate all the feedback. I played with some of the fonts EC mentioned. PD, what about using lower case caps in a different font? I really liked the look of using a serif and san serif.

            Unfortunately, I still could not marry the logo with the mark to my satisfaction:

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            Line Art Version: Asset 2.pdf

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            • #7
              I actually prefer the serif font when its on its own, but I like the sans serif fonts better when paired with the mark -- there's a casualness about that shape that I don't know is working with the more formal serif font.

              Try this -- that last font you have there, I believe it's Din? Try that in all caps (because I think initial caps is too casual for what you do), and tuck it under the P so the mark and the text are not separated so much. Then adjust the scale so the "P" is bigger and the company name can live "tucked in" to that white space under the bowl of the P. Then experiment with putting it on one line, and on two lines, try to make the overall shape more "square" and less spread out. In other words, now things are all things sitting on the same line and not really related to one another, but somehow they have to feel more connected. Does that make sense/help?

              Another thing to maybe try is putting the "JP" mark in a circle. That is, make the circle gray and reverse the JP in white. Then set it next to all caps sans serif.

              Just things to try!
              Last edited by EC; 05-04-2017, 10:16 PM.
              You can fool some of the people all the time, and those are the ones you want to concentrate on. --GWB

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