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Junior Member- Jan 2007
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Yes you are!
- Nov 2005
- 3588
I like the logo, simple and it conveys what it is for. The only thing I would is remove the dot over the "b" I know it's supposed to be the ball but it's throwing me off and I don't think it's necessary. The word Golf Club should be 2 words, if you want to keep together like that I would differentiate between the 2 somehow, I like the design of the card but I would like to see a little more color but thats just me. -
Senior Member
- Dec 2004
- 363
i really like the logo and card design... like mechanix said the dot over the "b" isn't necessary. other than that i love itComment
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Baroness of Buffet
- Aug 2006
- 34368
I like the A with the golf ball dot next to it in the middle logo on the left. It's a shame that it's not on the card. I guess it will be used elsewhere?
Those grey lines are lovely. Elegant and conveys a great sense of movement.Comment
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(n) see: Awesome
- Mar 2006
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intelligent designer
- Dec 2004
- 1183
I hate to do this to you mate, but the golfer in the logo looks to me like he's trying to stab his neck with the head of the club. Try a different pose.
Otherwise, looks fine.Comment
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Formerly Satchel
- Jun 2005
- 3006
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Junior Member
- Jan 2007
- 18
I like it a lot. The whole point of flowing one design across all the different objects (business card, letter head...) makes it seem unified, and complete. The logo is really cool, and simple enough to be used anywhere.Comment
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- Oct 2005
- 2809
I agree with Logo, and remove the dot above the "B".
I also agree that the simplified A would be great for other things Budah. Like an embroidered polo/golf shirts/hats or even on some of the restaurant (if there is one in and owned by the club) materials like the cloth napkins beer glasses, even printed on the golf balls, or equipment at the club, etched on the glass of the entrance doors. Where as the other (top logo) can be used as you shown on the business materials.
Very elegant and simple.
*golf claps*Comment
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Banned
- Jan 2006
- 606
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Junior Member
- Jan 2007
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eek!
- Oct 2005
- 951
i like it, if it were me id put a little more work in to the shape of the golf club end and the guys legs. But thats only a tiny niggle. nice stuff!Comment
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Senior Member
- Dec 2005
- 530
I like this, very nice. I think the dot would be nice if the letters weren't so tight, but as they are the dot looks like it's might be trying to be an 'i', which throws it a bit. Also the letters are super tight on GOLF CLUB, when it's small it just looks like a splodge or a pattern to me. Other than that, I likes!Comment
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novice
- Feb 2007
- 5
Ok, I'm totally new and my first reply isn't a rave!
First of all, you did a great job! The presentation is tight.
Ok, my nit-picking (and it could just be me... I know)
First, the golfer- it is clear to me that it is a guy swinging a club, however, my eyes also seem to notice the club coming from his neck... perhaps try out different poses...
Or who knows, perhaps that is the best one to go with.
Second, the typeface for the body (not the logo). It is nice for reading, however, it reminds me of a seafood restaurant or a sailboat class.
Last, I swear, the photo- the colors seem off to me. Perhaps increase the saturation, play with the channels, ...
just a quickie..
But, looks awsome. Gah, I hope I'm being helpful and not a pedantic muffinhead.Comment
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Senior Member
- Sep 2005
- 7875
Personally, I have no problem with the dot making the b into a tee...
I will definitely agree with Distruktor though, about the club head and legs. The club head is too round, it should be squared off more, and the legs have something a little wrong with them. Shouldn't both shins be showing?Comment
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