I like the logo, simple and it conveys what it is for. The only thing I would is remove the dot over the "b" I know it's supposed to be the ball but it's throwing me off and I don't think it's necessary. The word Golf Club should be 2 words, if you want to keep together like that I would differentiate between the 2 somehow, I like the design of the card but I would like to see a little more color but thats just me.
I like it a lot. The whole point of flowing one design across all the different objects (business card, letter head...) makes it seem unified, and complete. The logo is really cool, and simple enough to be used anywhere.
I agree with Logo, and remove the dot above the "B".
I also agree that the simplified A would be great for other things Budah. Like an embroidered polo/golf shirts/hats or even on some of the restaurant (if there is one in and owned by the club) materials like the cloth napkins beer glasses, even printed on the golf balls, or equipment at the club, etched on the glass of the entrance doors. Where as the other (top logo) can be used as you shown on the business materials.
I like this, very nice. I think the dot would be nice if the letters weren't so tight, but as they are the dot looks like it's might be trying to be an 'i', which throws it a bit. Also the letters are super tight on GOLF CLUB, when it's small it just looks like a splodge or a pattern to me. Other than that, I likes!
Ok, I'm totally new and my first reply isn't a rave!
First of all, you did a great job! The presentation is tight.
Ok, my nit-picking (and it could just be me... I know)
First, the golfer- it is clear to me that it is a guy swinging a club, however, my eyes also seem to notice the club coming from his neck... perhaps try out different poses...
Or who knows, perhaps that is the best one to go with.
Second, the typeface for the body (not the logo). It is nice for reading, however, it reminds me of a seafood restaurant or a sailboat class.
Last, I swear, the photo- the colors seem off to me. Perhaps increase the saturation, play with the channels, ... just a quickie..
But, looks awsome. Gah, I hope I'm being helpful and not a pedantic muffinhead.
Personally, I have no problem with the dot making the b into a tee...
I will definitely agree with Distruktor though, about the club head and legs. The club head is too round, it should be squared off more, and the legs have something a little wrong with them. Shouldn't both shins be showing?
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