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    I've made yet another attempt at a room scene, which involves PS excessivesly.
    I tried to make the table as realistic as I could..


    Hope u like


    I'm a C4D fan..

  • #2
    The table only has 2 legs.. it needs a 3rd.
    Sigs. Made by the internet, for the internet.

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    • #3
      doesn't look like a floor, it looks like is floating in front of a wall
      http://martyng.com

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      • #4
        what elements were created in photoshop? it looks like the flowers are a masked object, as with the table shadow.

        the issues I can see with this are:
        1. the flowers look like they are made of playdough
        2. the shadow doesnt look right ( looks like it was made in photoshop). the talbe legs should be casting shadow.
        3. the vase isnt shaded at all, and has a very blurry texture.
        3. the doily under the vase has blue behind it.
        4. tha table has no texture, and the legs are wrong
        5. no floor definition.

        it seems that his has the same problems as your previous work.

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        • #5
          Originally posted by shmoo View Post
          The table only has 2 legs.. it needs a 3rd.
          I think it's one of those magic tables that can balance on only two legs.
          When all you have is a hammer, everything looks like a nail.

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