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  • Roth
    Reply to What do you think of my video game cover art?
    Roth
    This is inferior to the original in every way. PD made some very good points already to do with hierarchy, and energy. There are basically three elements, the figure, the name, and the background, so...
    Today, 12:14 AM
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    This is a bit of a stretch. It's like you saw the H in the weights, ran with it, hit a creative wall and tried really hard to make the rest fit. The logo and name are out of proportion to one another...
    Yesterday, 11:50 PM
  • extraordenary
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    Professional designers either create the images themselves, or get it from someone else with respects to the copyrights. Designers often make sure that the image they have is royalty-free so they don't...
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  • graphic91
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    Umm...really? I know about the design rules, but where to look first? There's not that much information or "look-at-mes" on it and it's just the cover of a video game. Most people who want to...
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    I like it. I like the way you've done the spacing.
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  • Logo revamp.

    This should be more fitting to the critique I had from you all.
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  • #2
    if you fax or engrave this, the A is going to be awfully hard to read. Have you tried working in straight black and white (no shades of gray) to make sure the mark is still legible?

    I don't understand the squiggly line. Is that supposed to be an s? It sort of reminds me of a tornado or something.
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    • #3
      Maybe try getting rid of the letter 'A'. Then enlarge the pencil so that it's the same size as the letters. The triangular pencil shape might still read as an 'A' in that context.

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      • #4
        I don't think the colors are in balance. They don't go so well together.

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        • #5
          If it wasn't for the url, I would see only 'Mearns' - not 'Smearns'.
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          • #6
            I went to your site, and I see now that the 'S' is for Sam, so I see why you've separated it visually from the word Mearns.

            I would work on making sure the 'S' appears as an 'S' though. It doesn't to me.
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            • #7
              Until I read Gregory's comment I didn't see the pencil point at all.
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