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  • Logo revamp.

    This should be more fitting to the critique I had from you all.
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  • #2
    if you fax or engrave this, the A is going to be awfully hard to read. Have you tried working in straight black and white (no shades of gray) to make sure the mark is still legible?

    I don't understand the squiggly line. Is that supposed to be an s? It sort of reminds me of a tornado or something.
    "It's never too late to be who you might have been." - George Eliot


    • #3
      Maybe try getting rid of the letter 'A'. Then enlarge the pencil so that it's the same size as the letters. The triangular pencil shape might still read as an 'A' in that context.


      • #4
        I don't think the colors are in balance. They don't go so well together.


        • #5
          If it wasn't for the url, I would see only 'Mearns' - not 'Smearns'.


          • #6
            I went to your site, and I see now that the 'S' is for Sam, so I see why you've separated it visually from the word Mearns.

            I would work on making sure the 'S' appears as an 'S' though. It doesn't to me.
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            • #7
              Until I read Gregory's comment I didn't see the pencil point at all.
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