I'm confused. You don't know what the typeface is, but you want critique on it? Did you make this?
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"I put my heart and my soul into my work, and have lost my mind in the process."
As far as bettering the logo itself, you gotta tell us more. What's the name of the company? What do they sell? Who do they sell it to? What image are you trying to portray for yourself within your industry? What is the company's philosophy/mission/etc.? This logo tells us nothing, so we really can't critique it.
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