Would appreciate it if someone could give me some feedback/thoughts on this...
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- Dec 2009
Dont understand all the mmmmmmms but I imagine there should be less m's and more .......'s or else no ......'s at all
Could the swirly part not be made up of a main almond and some other nut types rather than one almond shape and all the swirls. It looks a bit like a fireplace. I take it the m's are coming out of the mouth and not going in. What about a series of different nuts heading into the mouth like happens in reality, once you start eating those things they just go into your mouth like a conveyor belt. What about the swirly nuts being distorted like being sucked by a vacuum cleaner, in the direction of the mouth, showing that the jewels are being eaten. I think a munching mouth might be more appropriate than a sensual one.
I really like your ideas for it. Unfortunately I don't have the time to change much more than the basic layout, colours and fonts as I have to get them printed tomorrow. I do wish I had the time though, that idea sounds great!
It's very plain, and the lips are very Rolling Stones like. I don't think the lip colour matches the box colour either?
Is it meant to be 2 colour? Black and Magenta?
I don't like the plain look and the lips are freaking me out all up in the white space by itself.
Even you could continue the outline of the face using magenta and black lines, just to give the lips a structure to sit on.
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- Nov 2006
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- Aug 2006
Not keen on Cooper Black. Way too heavy for the otherwise delicate design. Contrast is one thing but that's taking it too far.
I also don't think it looks high end. That's what you were trying to do right?
You should do some research into high end food products.
- Aug 2008
Glossy lips don't make me want to eat nuts and raisins because all the crumbs would stick. There's not much movement or hierarchy in the composition either, the logo, lips, and mmmmm all seem to have the same weight. Yet, the one thing that tells us what it is (nuts & raisins) is the most inconspicuous.
Also, if this is for the US market then the Nutritional Facts box isn't formatted correctly, (though I'm guessing by the metric system used that it's probably not, so never mind in that case.)
Don't even have to read it to know that. There are certain ways the bars have to be, thick vs thin and stuff for it to be the correct way in Canada.
And I real alot of cereal boxes so I can see right away that it's not the way it should be.
if you'd like to be bored to death it's all available here for Canada. They even regular the type point size and leading. go them!
I like this though... b/c I can quickly read what I want to know in the grocery store. And it was very easy for us when my brother was little (who is a type 1 diabetic) to figure out conversions for him.
- Nov 2007
I tried to use lips in a design when I was still in school and my professor ripped me a new one… hope you have better luck than I.
is in a small blue box
- May 2008
Also i think the mmmm should have an h or two in there otherwise it doesn't sound right.
If you don't have time to change it now then maybe you'll have a chance at a later date so you can make something better for your portfolio.
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