My only crit is the text: "Pet Shop Boys Vs. The world"
Look at how that type of thing is normally treated on Comic Book covers.
it is usually MUCH more dynamic.
Oftentimes a perspective dimension is implied.
Also the "hero" has sort of a "branded" type treatement (Like superman, etc.)
I think it is good and has potential. My first impresion was that I didnt immediatly see what the word was in green because the type is too moved around and not too readable. I also agree there is too...