My only crit is the text: "Pet Shop Boys Vs. The world"
Look at how that type of thing is normally treated on Comic Book covers.
it is usually MUCH more dynamic.
Oftentimes a perspective dimension is implied.
Also the "hero" has sort of a "branded" type treatement (Like superman, etc.)
As someone who is in the process of hiring a junior graphic designer, I can't say how important it is to thoroughly read job descriptions. I put a couple hitches in the posting I put up and in doing so...