My only crit is the text: "Pet Shop Boys Vs. The world"
Look at how that type of thing is normally treated on Comic Book covers.
it is usually MUCH more dynamic.
Oftentimes a perspective dimension is implied.
Also the "hero" has sort of a "branded" type treatement (Like superman, etc.)
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