Because we only have the graphic to go by. This is why I asked for more info. What is this supposed to invite me to? An event? A club? What style of event/club is it? Who is this supposed to be geared toward? It's nearly impossible to critique something without any background to go along with it. All we have to go with it aside from the word 'invite' is that graphic. To me it looks more like an illustration that you'd find in a business magazine, expressing something along the lines of global economy.
Firstly just kidding around - it does look like he just ripped his balls off - with the two globe type things in his hands and his legs spreadeagled.
Didn't mean any offence, it was a light-hearted joke.
Secondly - need more info. Is there a reverse side to it?
It's not very descriptive as an invite.
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As I mentioned in my last post, in its current state it looks more like an illustration that you'd find in a business magazine alongside an article that references the global economy. Without text, it doesn't look like an invitation. Therefore I really can't critique it as such.
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