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    This is something I did a while back for college. I've made a few changes and thought I'd post up for critique before I put them in my portfolio.

    Letterhead



    Compliment slip



    Business card





  • #2
    Have you tried to printing them out to see how it looks? The address on the letterhead looks a little bit big.

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    • #3
      Thanks, yeah it does look big. Would you say this is better?

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      • #4
        hahaha! Roflol!

        What is the story behind this? Is it to aid those in Africa, or are you afraid of Africa?
        Last edited by Markasin3; 02-06-2010, 12:24 PM.

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        • #5
          Address is spelled wrong on the first line of each piece.
          "It's never too late to be who you might have been." - George Eliot

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          • #6
            Now that I look closer, your logo looks like a kid with horns. Don't know if you intended it to be like that.

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            • #7
              Thanks for pointing out the typo.

              And thanks for pointing that out Tofudge... looked like a triceratops. Do you think this is better? I'm not sure if it just looks like a deformed head?



              The charity is fictional and is for the aid of African orphans.

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              • #8
                Originally posted by PSPDan View Post
                Thanks for pointing out the typo.

                And thanks for pointing that out Tofudge... looked like a triceratops. Do you think this is better? I'm not sure if it just looks like a deformed head?



                The charity is fictional and is for the aid of African orphans.
                I know you're trying to combine Africa with aid, but I'm not sure if it's working. When it's purely black and white it reads as "afraid" which doesn't fit the idea of a charity for the aid of African orphans.

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                • #9
                  I didn't notice the head before. That is actually nice. It's like the arrow in fedex. I can't look at Africa the same again. Your revision makes the head more noticable.

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