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    Hello, I have been working on this website off and on for awhile now. I feel I am almost done with it but it seems like its missing something. Please any feedback or suggestions would be greatly appreciated.

    The site is running on Drupal.

    http://the-artillery.net/createve

    peaceupatowndown

  • #2
    "Sometimes when using a website you feel like your in front of a space ship"

    should read

    "Sometimes when using a website you feel like you're in front of a space ship"

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    • #3
      "Basically a front-end is what your customer sees there not gonna worry about how the content got their but just that it's there"

      should be:

      "Basically a front-end is what your customer sees they're not gonna worry about how the content got there but just that it's there"

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      • #4
        I'd be happy to proof read the rest ... I accept PayPal

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        • #5
          ok, just one more:

          "Its okay if your confused"

          should be:

          "It's okay if you're confused"

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          • #6
            Sorry I have not proof read through what i've written any text on the site was just written and filled in as ideas to go back in later and complete. My grammer is awful too and spelling :-(. I'll go back in in a little bit and fix those errors you pointed out.

            But all spelling and grammer aside what about the design?
            Last edited by artilleryatx; 02-07-2010, 08:37 AM.

            peaceupatowndown

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            • #7
              I quite like the design. Clear and easy to navigate.

              Not sure about using the Drupal logo as the favicon though? Perhaps doing something with the main apple on the front page would be better?

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              • #8
                thank you, yeah I haven't gotten around to adding the fav icon yet but once I get all the grammer and spelling errors I'll add it.

                peaceupatowndown

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                • #9
                  I think your text needs more contrast. Dark gray against dark gray isn't really that easy to read.

                  The portfolio section needs a lot of improvement.

                  The thumbnails just flat out don't represent the sites very well. I'd rather see a blurry screenshot of an entire page than a zoomed in portion of the bottom right of it. Your logos look bright and interesting but you excluded them from the thumbnail.

                  I'd also rather have the thumbnails start out bright and dim when you hover over them. Starting them out dim (like you have it) makes them look really drab and uninviting.

                  On the website pages: I don't think the little stereo knobs down on the bottom right of the images work that well. They're hard to click and hard to understand until the animation starts playing. I'd rather see numbers on those (1,2,3) with a label like "More Screenshots", or Next/Previous buttons.

                  The big apple header thing is OK for the homepage, but having it on every page is an inconvenience. It just gets in the way and you have to scroll too much to see what you want. On lower resolutions (netbooks are 600px high) it will be hard to see that the page has changed.
                  Swedish Meatball Pornography

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                  • #10
                    Thank you for your reply, I'm going to consider some of your suggestions.

                    peaceupatowndown

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