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  • Another logo,Feedback please.

    Feed back needed.

    Last edited by Aoun; 02-09-2010, 05:00 PM.

  • #2
    That is NOT a logo. You have done just about everything wrong when it comes to the rules of creating a logo...

    Why are their pot leaves in your letters?
    Last edited by CkretAjint; 02-09-2010, 05:02 PM.
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    • #3
      ^^ That isn't pot leaves, its Aussie national flag stars.
      and would you please explain what is wrong?

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      • #4
        it's just a graphic, it's not a logo.

        Read this explanation.
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        • #5
          I'd read a few articles on what logos are and what makes a good logo...
          http://creativebits.org/what_is_a_logo
          http://www.davidairey.com/what-makes-a-good-logo/

          just a couple to get you started.
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          • #6
            ^ thanks dear.

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            • #7
              I think, thread need to change title then.

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              • #8
                And a little more info on the 5 cardinal rules of logo design.

                It looks more like some sort of web banner than a logo.
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                • #9
                  I want to ask that most of the sports(espacially cricket) logos are vert similar to mine so why we do call them logo?
                  Examples:



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                  • #10
                    None of those are similar to your logo. Your logo uses raster images. That's the BIGGEST NO-NO EVER in logo design.
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                    • #11
                      ^^ oh so that's your point, actually this logo is just for a fantasy story, not like that what you had thought.User only want it in this size that's why.
                      My main purpose of posting is how is the design.

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                      • #12
                        It's very busy and cluttered. Too much going on. The spray paint-y look to the images really screams early 1980s.
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                        • #13
                          ^^ Thanks for feedback, i'll improve with time.

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