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  • ejlain
    Reply to Is this any good?
    ejlain
    Hi, I think it's a good start but, as already stated, you would have to consider the ways in which this design would be used. You mentioned that if it was used in 1-color you would get rid of the triangle....
    Today, 08:53 PM
  • ejlain
    Reply to Feedback for Tea Shop logo?
    ejlain
    Hi, I agree with previous posters that the bottom two seemed to be headed into a familiar coffee brand territory. I am drawn to the top two designs. As someone already mentioned,, the top left is subtle...
    Today, 08:37 PM
  • kion
    Reply to Website Feedback for Design Course
    kion
    Building upon what ash said, some more things to consider and work on:

    Your Design

    - Get rid of that background image. It's terribly distracting, cheesy and extremely unnecessary....
    Today, 06:48 PM
  • Carlo
    Reply to 50 Shades of Grey (with just one color swatch?)
    Carlo
    You could do it in illustrator.

    Make your design with the lines.

    And have the lines a rounded cap in the strokes panel

    Draw a rectangle around the lines and keep...
    Today, 06:27 PM
  • kion
    Reply to So the powers that be...
    kion
    Welcome to the web, I moved into web design from laying out textbooks in print over five years ago and craziest thing is people keep shifting me more and more towards pure development. Here's a free resource...
    Today, 06:25 PM

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    Hello forumers,

    I invite you to check out my site:

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    Let me know your thoughts on the look, format, layout, coding, whatever your expertise... and it will be greatly appreciated!

  • #2
    Just a first impression, I would scale down your background image just a touch, the text isn't visible unless you scroll down (at least not for me on 1280x800) Otherwise a nice, clean design.

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