This is an advertisement (one of two) I am working on for a company who produces these electrical units.
I had a meeting with the clients and although the meeting went well the brief was rather... well, brief. Not many good pictures were provided (which can all be found on their website) and not very much copy was provided. I was given a rough idea of the copy and a headline to include but was encouraged to 'jazz it up'... Not to mention it was way to wordy for a 1/4 page ad.
The ads will run in two magazines, one being and electrical mag and the other a landscape and architecture.
Anyway, this is my first draft and I am looking for some honest feedback!
What are your thouhts about the ad? The layout?
Would you skip right over this ad?
Is there enough info, where you would know what the product is?
How could I improve?
Any suggestions or comments would be greatly appreciated.