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  • Posterclash Submission

    I entered http://clash.aigablueridge.org/ as an assignment.

    The theme is:change one thing

    This is what i came up with:
    Last edited by garricks; 02-24-2010, 10:40 PM.

  • #2
    no replies after 41 views??

    no advice? criticism?

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    • #3
      It's not much criticism, but I honestly don't understand the concept of your poster. I'm guessing it means that the one thing you'd change is to enjoy the little things ... but the computer menu drop down doesn't convey anything about changing.
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      • #4
        Part of the problem might be that you posted links instead of the images. I changed your [url] tags to [img] tags so the poster will show up here.
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        • #5
          I appreciate the crit! You're correct about my concept, i just felt that a computer version of life would be a different way to approach things, and be able to stress the numerous other things that can get in the way(without being too distracting and cumbersome visually)

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          • #6
            thank you garricks!

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            • #7
              I think the design is pretty cool...

              "Enjoy the little things" is a bit cliche but I think it works anyway

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              • #8
                Too much stuff to read... I just don't have an urge to read on...

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                • #9
                  Why the sunburst? Cliche. Overused. Yawn-inducing. Or Dander-raising depending on your generation...

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                  • #10
                    It's 2:55 pm and "Sleep" is grayed out. I think you need to trash your preferences.

                    The poster is ok, nothing special. At least it's original and your own artwork and not copied from google. Just think you could have thought more about this and implemented it differently somehow.

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                    • #11
                      that sure is an odd aspect ratio.

                      "There's something about turning the pages of a book or magazine and the felling of rubbing your hands across the words."

                      This is my pen tool. There are many like it, but this one is MINE. My pen tool is my best friend. It is my life. I must master it as I must master my life. My pen tool without me is useless. Without my pen tool, I am useless.

                      there is no grey area when it comes to 1 color logos.

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by JoeyGuns View Post
                        I appreciate the crit! You're correct about my concept, i just felt that a computer version of life would be a different way to approach things, and be able to stress the numerous other things that can get in the way(without being too distracting and cumbersome visually)
                        But what is the one thing you're changing?
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                        • #13
                          What happened to the image? I don't see anything.
                          “The significant problems we face cannot be solved at the same level we created them.” Albert Einstein

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                          • #14
                            i'm still seein it brie

                            "There's something about turning the pages of a book or magazine and the felling of rubbing your hands across the words."

                            This is my pen tool. There are many like it, but this one is MINE. My pen tool is my best friend. It is my life. I must master it as I must master my life. My pen tool without me is useless. Without my pen tool, I am useless.

                            there is no grey area when it comes to 1 color logos.

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                            • #15
                              huh, maybe its something to do with my work computer?
                              “The significant problems we face cannot be solved at the same level we created them.” Albert Einstein

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