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    Hi everyone, this is my first crit.

    as you can see below Innate means something your born with in my case being creative this is what i have been working on after about 14 pages of pencil scribbles trying to come up with a name then putting it all together. dont worry about the word creative in the logo its more the inn8 if it is readable and if you get it.

    would love some feed back, good or bad,


    Thank you very much in advance guys


    Rob (arty1)


    in·nate   [ih-neyt, in-eyt] Show IPA
    –adjective
    1. existing in one from birth; inborn; native: innate musical talent.
    2. inherent in the essential character of something: an innate defect in the hypothesis.
    3. originating in or arising from the intellect or the constitution of the mind, rather than learned through experience: an innate knowledge of good and evil.
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  • #2
    Innate? Where? I read ING with some effort.
    Last edited by lucdesaulniers; 02-24-2010, 11:11 PM. Reason: Oh, now I get it , the 8...

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    • #3
      Originally posted by lucdesaulniers View Post
      Innate? Where? I read ING with some effort.
      I think he/she is trying to use the 8 for the a-t-e part. Inneight for Innate.

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      • #4
        I read this as "ing" at first glance, too. I don't think I would have seen "Innate" unless you had spelled it out in your post.

        Who is your target market? Would you say that you are seeking conservative, traditional businesses as clients or a younger leet-speaking crowd (perhaps bands needing cd covers and whatnot)?

        Your logo should appeal to your target audience.
        "It's never too late to be who you might have been." - George Eliot

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        • #5
          I think you need a bit more of your self-heralded creativity. Although it would make a great snorkling logo.

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          • #6
            Using numbers as part of words has been done to death.

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            • #7
              If I hadn't read the word 'innate' in your post I would not have known that's what your card was supposed to say. I saw 'inoo' before I saw the 'ing' that everyone else seems to be seeing.
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              • #8
                thank you

                ok thank you for the crit guys, back to the drawing board.

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                • #9
                  I thought you were trying to write innovate. I think losing one N and placing IN better would make this an interesting logo.

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                  • #10
                    I also saw ING at first, but it unfortunately also reminds me of the "OGC" logo tragedy from a couple years ago. Below, left as it appears on letterhead; right, as it appears when you tilt your head to the left.

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