I have come up with these two designs so far. It is a custom home builder company and they wanted the island they live on in the logo. Please let me know what you think....should the island be there?
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This logo does not work on so many levels.
It looks like a 5 min job in photoshop. First, lose the 3d on the type. second, the black writing over the black out line makes it very hard to read.
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I have to agree with Oldat. You'll never be able to to embroider that logo on company polo shirts and jackets, and decals for their hard hats, stencils for their tool boxes, etc.Comment
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Secret Agent Man
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Get rid of the island I would say. But once you do that, and lose the 3D, there's nothing left really. Ah well, at least you will be half way to completion if you start again.Comment
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For the island to work it needs to be more impressionistic, with the type placed somewhere around it. That would solve the legibility problem.Comment
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Thank you all for your replies. I think I am going to pass on this. I do appreciate all your help but I don't think I am ready to do a logo.
Thanks again...Comment
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Just before you jump ship, take a look at this,Originally posted by MrsHoneyBunny View Post
http://www.smashingmagazine.com/2009...e-logo-design/
I think personally this is one of the best bits of advice I got on here, from the Roth Man Royale.Comment
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Today, 05:58 PMCommented to site logothanks for your interest. it is no longer available because i have decided to go with a full width header. cheers! -
Today, 05:57 PMCommented to review logo pleasethanks for the comments. it sounds like using a full width header is a better option. no more comments please - i have taken down the logo from my host account. cheers!
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Today, 04:48 PMCommented to Poster designAdding my thoughts to the pot:
- Kerning needs attention.
- Why have tiny illegible type especially with a big blank space at the bottom?
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Today, 04:34 PMCommented to How do you handle proofs?They send a copy of the sales order too with all of the information that's on the proof....
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Today, 04:26 PMI seem to be having this issue with a transparent object placed over top of a solid pantone colour making the pantone colour under it convert to CMYK.
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Today, 04:11 PMCommented to Need protection. What do I do?If the client in any way indicates that they are still undecided on which designer to higher, or if they're just looking for a quote, don't do any design work. If they want to see "what ideas you...
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