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    can everyone gimme some feedback on this please? It's an event logo for a fundraiser marathon. any and all ideas, comments, crits, feedback etc.

    Last edited by chompiraz; 03-17-2010, 06:02 PM. Reason: forgot the picture

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      oops whered i post it?

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        • #5
          Surely you can conjure up something in a playground which isn't so static? It looks more like Frozen in the Playground.
          When men will beg God to kill them and they won’t be able to die

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          • #6
            The black looks far too heavy. It draws your eye too much away from the type. Maybe try some different colours or try re-working or redrawing the see-saw to integrate with the type maybe.

            Id personally think of some other items etc that you would find in a playground and see what other alternatives you can come up with.

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            • #7
              This should be a fun image to create! I like the see-saw idea but maybe tip it more. I think you could play more with the type - different font/sizes/word arrangement. Like, all the text to the left would make it really tip down on that side. Maybe sit 'playground' right on top of the see-saw. Why is the see-saw image rough looking?
              I wouldn't worry about colors just yet either.

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              • #8
                marathon event logos are usually sporty
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                • #9
                  so this is a marathon? The logo is then a HUGE factor in generating interest and excitement in the marathon. It should be more playful and maybe include more vibrant colors? Could use the playground merry-go-round as a sort of treadmil?...i don't know. I just know that a marathon logo should include some movement to keep people motivated. Good start though have fun with it

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                  • #10
                    my favorite part about playing on the see saw was bouncing on the ground and watching my little brother go flying up...that was awesome ! So, maybe you can add a little fun to it. I do like the see saw idea.
                    sigpickeep it simple or simply keep it

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                    • #11
                      thanks for the input, keep it coming. I'll try to develop other sketches.

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