Typography Class Sketches (image heavy)
Hello! I'm looking for some feedback on sketches for a drink recipe project in my Typography class. Normally, I would get feedback from my peers, but I missed today's class, so I would really appreciate your time if you could help a student out and take a minute to look through all of these sketches.
All I need to know is:
The lines in each image represent x-height for text. Darker lines=bolded text. The text will be a combination of the drink's name (The Classic Cuban Mojito), the recipe ingredients, and instructions. As you can see, I didn't start putting actual words in my sketches until #7, because as students we're supposed to be analyzing hierarchy and form when sketching.
Thank you so much in advance for your critiques! It's really appreciated, the more
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All I need to know is:
- Which one in each set do you prefer? (ie. 1A or 1B, 2A or 2B, etc.)
- If you're feeling generous: Any simple critiques/comments/suggestions on composition/flow.
The lines in each image represent x-height for text. Darker lines=bolded text. The text will be a combination of the drink's name (The Classic Cuban Mojito), the recipe ingredients, and instructions. As you can see, I didn't start putting actual words in my sketches until #7, because as students we're supposed to be analyzing hierarchy and form when sketching.
Thank you so much in advance for your critiques! It's really appreciated, the more
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