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    Going for the hipster aesthetic is about minimalism, which in itself is about good placement. So you have the basic elements right - Trade Gothic, 'est.'script font, circular holding shape, business emblem....
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  • #16
    Originally posted by Dris View Post
    #4 is the most promising to me in terms of shapes and colour. The "studio" bit could probably fit nicely in the reactangle created by the right side of the 4 and the top of the five.
    Thanks Dris -
    I had fitted the 'Studio' in the stem in sample six?
    Never trust someone, who, if left alone in a room with a tea cosy, doesnt try it on..

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    • #17
      No I mean inside of this shape in the the top right.
      /|Studio


      If that makes any sense?

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      • #18
        I also like no 4... 'studio' isn't quite right for me - can you play around w it a bit? It just doesn't quite go with the 45, maybe it's a touch too small, or should be bold... definitely don't like the font in 1-3, doesn't go w the 45.

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        • #19
          just a thought: make 'studio' bigger and run it between the 4 and 5, parallel with the diagonal of the 5, breaking into the 4 towards the base and running into the triangle of the 5, making it white where it intersects the 4.
          Then it's integrated w the 45, not an afterthought

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          • #20
            I think the bottom of the 4 might look good if it followed the same diagonal as the upper part of the 5, rather than being horizontal (does that make sense?)

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            • #21
              So is it your intention to make a visual reference to the famous Studio 54? I mean the name is close enough and your graphic leanings are leaning toward that era.
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              • #22
                Originally posted by Virgo Nightingale View Post
                So is it your intention to make a visual reference to the famous Studio 54? I mean the name is close enough and your graphic leanings are leaning toward that era.

                Nope not at all - although that crossed my mind after when I looked at it - but then it was a common font in the 70s - The logo itself doesnt look like S54 other than theres numbers in it and the font is 'retro'.
                Never trust someone, who, if left alone in a room with a tea cosy, doesnt try it on..

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                • #23
                  i dont see the 45 either. It's quite hard. i guess that's the contempoary part of your logo? i would suggest if you're trying to incorporate 45 like within the design itself, then add the 45 and then tweak the insides of the 45 to a shape you like. sort of a negative design effect.

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                  • #24
                    I think Rachel b had a good idea

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                    • #25
                      Originally posted by Paj View Post
                      I think the bottom of the 4 might look good if it followed the same diagonal as the upper part of the 5, rather than being horizontal (does that make sense?)
                      I second the motion!
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                      • #26
                        Originally posted by Rachel B View Post
                        just a thought: make 'studio' bigger and run it between the 4 and 5, parallel with the diagonal of the 5, breaking into the 4 towards the base and running into the triangle of the 5, making it white where it intersects the 4.
                        Then it's integrated w the 45, not an afterthought
                        I see what you mean but isnt that quite like the first three? Studio being intergrated to the 45? I also agree about the font - its screaming hair studio to me at the moment!

                        Also I have tried to do as you said there but it doesnt work (Unless I am not getting what you are saying) Studio just looks like its 'plonked' there....

                        God, it so much easier designing logos for clients!
                        Last edited by Jahbuzzz; 04-24-2012, 09:19 PM.
                        Never trust someone, who, if left alone in a room with a tea cosy, doesnt try it on..

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                        • #27
                          Originally posted by Paj View Post
                          I think the bottom of the 4 might look good if it followed the same diagonal as the upper part of the 5, rather than being horizontal (does that make sense?)
                          It does - tried it - looks interesting but even less like 45 - even by my standards!
                          Never trust someone, who, if left alone in a room with a tea cosy, doesnt try it on..

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                          • #28
                            no, it is different, I'd post it but that's against the rules. It was kind of tucked into the middle of the logo... if you try what I said you'll see.

                            Cause what I did was copy the logo and mess with it till I got something I liked (my midnight - 2 am entertainment, like when I'm too tired to go to bed and find something worthwhile in the crit pit).

                            BTW I think you are almost to a really fine logo

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                            • #29
                              Originally posted by Rachel B View Post
                              no, it is different, I'd post it but that's against the rules. It was kind of tucked into the middle of the logo... if you try what I said you'll see.
                              I did try it but I cant see it working - could you email me what you mean? If thats not breaking any rules ....
                              Never trust someone, who, if left alone in a room with a tea cosy, doesnt try it on..

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                              • #30
                                Originally posted by Rachel B View Post

                                BTW I think you are almost to a really fine logo
                                Thanks for that - I feel like chucking it at the wall and seeing how it lands at the moment...
                                Never trust someone, who, if left alone in a room with a tea cosy, doesnt try it on..

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