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  • #16
    Originally posted by RKS View Post
    Thanks for the suggestions!

    By the way, yeah, it's Inkscape.

    @palo1, what do you mean the "OS" alternative for Illustrator? I assume you mean Mac OS.
    Sorry, I forget that "OS" can mean many different abbreviations. In this interpretation, I meant "Open Source", not "Operating System."
    ~People like me are the reason people like you take medication~
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    • #17
      Two minor items: Russian speakers will probably see the backward "R" as the letter "Ya", and the upper curve of the "S" comes uncomfortably near to the "K". Not sure there's any easy / attractive way to address either of these, though, and they are minor. (For instance, I can easily imagine trying to open up that close approach and ending up wrecking the S curve.)

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      • #18
        The penguin NOT related to the logo. I thought two threads were unnecessary.

        I only know Spanish and English, so I doubt Russian speakers will even get the app.

        I saw the recommendation for changing the S curve, but I spent 15 minutes trying to perfect that. I think it will be ruined if I screw with it.

        Thanks for all the crits and all the future ones!
        Last edited by RKS; 04-20-2012, 05:05 AM.

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        • #19
          I guess that I've just seen too many cute little penguins or puffins or whatever they are lately. This one's from the Chinese social networking Mac app called QQ.

          Last edited by B; 04-20-2012, 06:20 AM.

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          • #20
            Originally posted by Meffy View Post
            Two minor items: Russian speakers will probably see the backward "R" as the letter "Ya", and the upper curve of the "S" comes uncomfortably near to the "K". Not sure there's any easy / attractive way to address either of these, though, and they are minor. (For instance, I can easily imagine trying to open up that close approach and ending up wrecking the S curve.)
            it also feels a tight to me, and the s in games comes too close to the k as well. Can you wing out the bottom leg of the k on a slightly wider angle? Think it would balance better.

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            • #21
              I have nothing to critique here, overall it looks like a fine piece of cartoon work neatly done. Except a small adjustment. The shadow cast from a fan doesn't quite look right there.

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