Vary your line weight, gradients on both the toon and the background or no gradients at all; the styles clash too much otherwise. Typography could use a boost as well as it's plain compared to the work done on the rest of the elements.
In life there are a lot of grey areas; not in the conception phase of logo design.
When a person asks you to do work for nothing in return, they are saying to your face, "You're worthless but useful to me."
Shall is a direct command whereas the verb will is a prophecy of the future.