There's a lot wrong with this. Granted, you did sort of sketch it out first, but you didn't bother to sketch out the entire logo. I don't really know what the logo is supposed to be. If I stare at it long enough I sort of see a heart and a lower case "b". Kind of reminds me of a butterfly.
The text needs a lot of work. I'm not fond of the name either.
The sketch is an interesting concept, but the final version wasn't executed very well. I don't know if this was your intention, but the two letters S and B almost form a heart. I think you should play around more with that concept.
I also agree about the color pallet not working at all.
"Design is not just what it looks like and feels like. Design is how it works."
the mark is a good start
+1 on the color, you want warm heartful colors,
and the font and layout...
this is not a corporate report, this needs to be warm and alive and romance oriented, which it currently is not.
I'm not yet done coding, but you can visit it and see the design live here: khayoespa.com I spend hours coding that I don't think the design is any good. I need someone with years' of experience in website...