There's a lot wrong with this. Granted, you did sort of sketch it out first, but you didn't bother to sketch out the entire logo. I don't really know what the logo is supposed to be. If I stare at it long enough I sort of see a heart and a lower case "b". Kind of reminds me of a butterfly.
The text needs a lot of work. I'm not fond of the name either.
The sketch is an interesting concept, but the final version wasn't executed very well. I don't know if this was your intention, but the two letters S and B almost form a heart. I think you should play around more with that concept.
I also agree about the color pallet not working at all.
"Design is not just what it looks like and feels like. Design is how it works."
the mark is a good start
+1 on the color, you want warm heartful colors,
and the font and layout...
this is not a corporate report, this needs to be warm and alive and romance oriented, which it currently is not.
It's not an issue of inexperience in web design work. My guess is that you put the site together without putting much thought into its purpose. As Calebninja notes, 'It seems to be a mix of a personal...
You strike me as the type of guy who is well-accustomed to software and systems. The average user like the guys in our front office, can break things unintentionally by just looking at them. Either system...