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    Hello again,

    This time I'm working on a logo for a bodycare academy. This company offers services for bodycare, to be precise - body slimming mostly.

    Here's my work in progress (Lieknejimo akademija stands for bodycare (slimming) academy):
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    By academy, do mean this is a training facility? If it is, you need to look at logos for other training facilities. Training facility logos must look credible and formal. People are investing their futures in the client's academy.

    The body image doesn't look very flattering. For a product that relies on perfection of the body, you should really use a more perfect body. The font you have used is hard to read and needs a lot of kerning attention. The whole thing looks very flimsy like it would blow away in the wind.

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    • #3
      I agree with everythign Buda said.

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      • #4
        The font is hard to read. The body needs to bolder.

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