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    Critique plz


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    • #3
      not sure the intent here, but im assuming hip hop album? it has this serious "gangsta" feel, until you get to the word dreams. then kind of has a comical feel. I would suggest finding a different way to iterate the feeling of "dreams"

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      • #4
        I like your color choices. I am in agreement with infinity. The word "dreams" be done differently. Also in the word Brooklyn, try to stay away from using gradients in typography.

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        • #5
          thanks here i switched it up a little

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          • #6
            The kerning is way off. It reads BROOKL YN.

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            • #7
              Im confused about the crown.. I feel like I should be able to see the inside back of it.. but I cant.

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              • #8
                1. I'm assuming you got the licensing to use these photos, correct?

                2. Also, the parental advisory is too close to the edge, and whatever is next to it is too small to read. Although until you take care of #1, it doesn't matter.

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                • #9
                  Excuse me for my ignorance on the subject as I don't listen to wrap, but are these images of famous rappers?

                  Or are they local artists?

                  I assumed the latter, but if it's the former, you definitely need to get the correct licensing/royalties. You would also need licensing/permission from local artists too, however.

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                  • #10
                    Why are you assuming it's rap music?

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                    • #11
                      Its a mixtape cover these are for promotional use only. If you have looked
                      At other mixtape covers there animated with a whole bunch of rappers in one cover
                      And these pictures are free to use officialpsds.com. But thanks for all the feedback
                      Im just practicing.

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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by Ifgfx View Post
                        Its a mixtape cover these are for promotional use only. If you have looked
                        At other mixtape covers there animated with a whole bunch of rappers in one cover
                        And these pictures are free to use officialpsds.com. But thanks for all the feedback
                        Im just practicing.
                        Just because you found them on that site does not make them legal to use. If it was a photo of a flower or something, then you could probably get away with it. But if you are using a photo of a person, you have to have the permission of that person (or their agent, or whoever) to use their likeness.

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                        • #13
                          Ok thanks for the information.

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                          • #14
                            Originally posted by Cosmo View Post
                            But if you are using a photo of a person, you have to have the permission of that person (or their agent, or whoever) to use their likeness.
                            Plus permission from the photographer.

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                            • #15
                              I have a feeling this is just a personal project? And Dlevan - its Rap not Wrap :-P

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