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    Greetings all! This is my first freelance gig (besides things I've done for friend's bands) and I wanted to know what you all think. The client asked for this font style, color scheme and use of photos. Any feedback/thoughts are appreciated.

    Thanks!

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  • #2
    I like the one on the bottom best. The curve in the background of the upper graphic throws the design off for me. Feels like the curve is fighting with the photos for attention.

    MHO, though.

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    • #3
      Thanks St. T. What is your feeling on the stirrup shape off of the base of the p. I hoping the client digs it so it's not another boring, plain text logo. Anyone else have some food for thought?

      Thanks!

      That's how I roll!
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      • #4
        I liked the top one, my eyes moved in the direction of the curve (leading to the photos, which speak a thousand words in a small space) so at least for me, it worked. And I like the stirrup on the p. Very nicely done.

        OH -- I noticed on second glance that it's an aparel site? Have any photos of the product you can include?

        Post Edited (EC) : 4/12/2005 8:56:41 PM GMT
        You can fool some of the people all the time, and those are the ones you want to concentrate on. --GWB

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        • #5
          I agree with EC, i think the number 1 has more style and is soft tha the other.


          i donīt like the texture from number 2 also.

          See ya.


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          • #6
            Good job on number one my eyes were drawn to it at first glance. NICE!!!!

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            • #7
              I like the top one more.





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              • #8
                agreed... #1

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                • #9
                  Hey all-
                  Thanks for the feedback. The client went with #1. A minor modification on the photo drop shadows but other than that, she loved the design. Sweetness!

                  Thanks!

                  That's how I roll!
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                  • #10
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                    You can fool some of the people all the time, and those are the ones you want to concentrate on. --GWB

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