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    i have already put this up ion the forum but i have made some improvements, let me know what you think please

    N.d.j.m

  • #2
    Aha..mmmm? realistic?

    I think like a lot of people that art is everything but everything with some sence, so, maybe you right...

    Your art2.jpg could be named room with dead man and a bloody bath.

    I like it but I think that 'Who said art... is useless, because I couldnīt find the realistic on the scene.

    see ya guero


    This is my space ship...and my galaxy.
    I have nothing to say, The Strokes...

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    • #3
      You need to work more on your perspectives... Everything seems a little flat, and out of scale to be honest.



      http://dabeanz.deviantart.com

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      • #4
        maybe itīs surrealistic....


        This is my space ship...and my galaxy.
        I have nothing to say, The Strokes...

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        • #5
          thanks for the tips guys

          N.d.j.m

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          • #6
            Realism: real world EVENTS

            Naturalism: Making something appear real... the way it is RENDERED

            Your wording is confussing to the 'naked' eye.

            Your saying:

            bueatifull = Naturalism.... which is not true. Something can look to be 'naturalistic' and still look ugly. How about photograph of of poo,lol.

            Realistic = The event of murder in the depiction is a real world event (realism).

            Most people get realism confussed with a naturalism. As the above two posters might have become, but it could have also been your wording also. I just get the concept because it has been pounded into my head and your piece exhibits it quite througly.

            However, it would be better to word your piece in a way less 'hypicritical' to the 'general' audience.

            You could also just make it simple and change it to the below:

            Realism over Naturalism

            - Your piece is perfectly depicts this concept.

            Realistic event rendered in a not so naturalistic style. Makes perfect sense to me.

            The ordinary viewer will view it and think:

            Realism over naturalism?

            - Nothing appears realistic everything is out of perspective and it looks like a cartoon.

            Hence, thinking you are being hypicritical and have no clue what you are talking about.

            Either way its hard to say it without the 'general' viewer' thinking your being hypicritical.

            However: I get it,lol

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            Post Edited (tZ) : 4/19/2005 4:49:57 AM GMT

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            • #7
              My man, wonderful description.


              This is my space ship...and my galaxy.
              I have nothing to say, The Strokes...

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              • #8
                Is that supposed to be realistic?

                OK there's a guy shot dead in a bathroom, a realistic everyday occurance for most of us, but Pink Walls? come on!

                PS: This is what part of the Alphabet would look like if Q & R were eliminated!
                PS - This is what part of the Alphabet would look like if Q & R were eliminated

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